نمونه جواب رایتینگ آیلتس

IELTS Writing Couse by Dr.Arian Karimi a Certified IELTS Teacher by UK and Tehran IELTS Expert     دوره رایتینگ آیلتس با دکتر آرین کریمی متخصص آیلتس با مدرک تدریس آیلتس از انگلستان در تهران سعادت آباد - شهرک غرب     نمونه جواب Writing آیلتس تسک 2   IELTS Writing Task 2 Given Topic   As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.   A Good Writing Model Answer   There is no doubt that education and the learning process has changed since the introduction of computers: The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has expedited the data availability. Though experts systems have made computers more intelligent, they have not yet become a substitute of the human interaction in the learning process. In my opinion what can be expected is a change of the teachers’ role, but not their disappearance from the classroom.   Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers using online classes and materials. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an enjoyable task for a child. This, accompanied by the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually contributes to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher educational level the availability of digital books, simulators and other academic materials provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise would not be at hand.   But, besides the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software, which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need for human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the specifics ... ادامه مطلب

نمونه جواب رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 2 با نمره 7 در آزمون آیلتس آکادمیک نوشته شده توسط خانم نسیم اچ از دانشجویان دکتر آرین کریمی   IELTS Writing Task 2 with Band 7 Answer Model   In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?   During the past century, we were witness of a significant improvement in the agriculture sector. Modernizing the ways of planting, processing and harvesting, using new fertilizers and pesticides have greatly contributed to increasing the quantity and quality of the agricultural products. However, these technologies have not reached everyone equally. There is still huge number of people in the world who cannot afford to meet their basic nutritional needs. The essay tries to assess the main reasons of this inequality and gives some recommendation to address this challenge.   Firstly, it is estimated that millions of people still earn less than one dollar per day and live in extreme poverty. Although significant promotions have been made in manufacturing sufficient food, people in less developed countries still suffer from starvation. In another word, only people in developed countries get benefit from advantages of this modernization. Apart from the unequal access to technologies, mismanagement of the resources is also an important factor leading to inadequate production. For instance, in my hometown, Iran despite having basic infrastructure such as fertile lands, enough sunlight and necessary agricultural equipment, the excessive and unsustainable use of water resources caused many problems for farmers in recent years.   Having mentioned the main reasons of endurance of hunger in some parts of the world, some solutions have been introduced by some experts. On the top of them are the ratification of the resolutions on millennium development ... ادامه مطلب

نمونه جواب رایتینگ آیلتس تسک 2 با نمره 7.5 در آزمون آیلتس آکادمیک نوشته شده توسط خانم سمیه - ن از دانشجویان دکتر آرین کریمی   کلاس تخصصی آیلتس دکتر آرین کریمی کلاس رایتینگ آیلتس در 5 جلسه     IELTS Writing Task 2 with Band 7.5 Answer Model Many people believe that the use of new technology improves lives of employees. Others think it is a disadvantage for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.     Although some people suppose that technology plays a crucial role in individuals’ jobs, there remains some disagreement on this view. I personally contend that technology is deemed critically essential in every society on the globe.   Many people believe the use of technology is a key to improvement in work places. Advocates of this view consider a number of primary reasons for that. Firstly, the technology provides the employees with a more comfortable situation to work. Furthermore, it saves them time as tasks would be done more rapidly. Finally and even more importantly, technology serves quality services due to involving organized data. Salient examples of new technologies are computers that are widely employed in various organizations and institutions and entail the three mentioned merits.   In stark contrast, some other people introduce dependency as a major problem. They remain convinced that employees are not able to work any longer if technology would be removed from their life. They clarify that if power would be cut out for a short while, it remains labor force jobless during that time and the tasks would not be accomplished until the electricity comes back on. A further drawback they assert is that technology has made occupations solitary and sedentary and hence, slob employees at work.   From a personal point of view, due to the reasons ... ادامه مطلب