IELTS Writing Couse by Dr.Arian Karimi a Certified IELTS Teacher by UK and Tehran IELTS Expert
دوره رایتینگ آیلتس با دکتر آرین کریمی متخصص آیلتس با مدرک تدریس آیلتس از انگلستان در تهران سعادت آباد - شهرک غرب
نمونه جواب Writing آیلتس تسک 2
IELTS Writing Task 2 Given Topic
As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.
A Good Writing Model Answer
There is no doubt that education and the learning process has changed since the introduction of computers: The search for information has become easier and amusing, and connectivity has expedited the data availability. Though experts systems have made computers more intelligent, they have not yet become a substitute of the human interaction in the learning process. In my opinion what can be expected is a change of the teachers’ role, but not their disappearance from the classroom.
Nobody can argue that the acquisition of knowledge is more fun and easier with computers using online classes and materials. The mere activity of touching and exploring this device constitutes an enjoyable task for a child. This, accompanied by the relaxing attitude and software interactivity, usually contributes to a better grasping of new knowledge. At a higher educational level the availability of digital books, simulators and other academic materials provide the student with an ever accessible source of information, that otherwise would not be at hand.
But, besides the increasing complexity and behavior of intelligent software, which is usually embedded in the academic digital material, the need for human interaction in the learning process will always be present, at least in the foreseeable future. There is the necessity for a human being to be able to determine what the specifics ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2
It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.
It is a widely held perception that individuals do not spend time with family members like before. This essay aims to identify the sources of this problem and offer possible solutions.
On the basis of research findings over the last few decades, financial constrains have made both parents work and made it difficult for them to get together after a hard long day and spend any time with their children and even with themselves being overtired. The second source of this problem concerns with the use of technology. It is an irrefutable fact that technology has kept family members apart considerably and made them indoor types to stay busy with sedentary and passive activities. A salient example is the use of the cellphone which is widely seen in ever one’s hands nowadays. Unfortunately a vast majority of people would rather work with their cellphone rather than talk to others. This issue has led family members to live in isolation.
Admittedly, there are two main solutions to this critical problem. Firstly, individuals have to lessen the amount of workload to enjoy more time with family members and friends. In so doing, they would get together to share more feelings and emotions. Further, though, and equally important is to allot particular time during the day to use their cellphones so that they can dedicate more time being with their family members and intimate friends. I wish people realize the ...
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IELTS Writing Task 2 with Band 7 Answer Model
In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
During the past century, we were witness of a significant improvement in the agriculture sector. Modernizing the ways of planting, processing and harvesting, using new fertilizers and pesticides have greatly contributed to increasing the quantity and quality of the agricultural products. However, these technologies have not reached everyone equally. There is still huge number of people in the world who cannot afford to meet their basic nutritional needs. The essay tries to assess the main reasons of this inequality and gives some recommendation to address this challenge.
Firstly, it is estimated that millions of people still earn less than one dollar per day and live in extreme poverty. Although significant promotions have been made in manufacturing sufficient food, people in less developed countries still suffer from starvation. In another word, only people in developed countries get benefit from advantages of this modernization. Apart from the unequal access to technologies, mismanagement of the resources is also an important factor leading to inadequate production. For instance, in my hometown, Iran despite having basic infrastructure such as fertile lands, enough sunlight and necessary agricultural equipment, the excessive and unsustainable use of water resources caused many problems for farmers in recent years.
Having mentioned the main reasons of endurance of hunger in some parts of the world, some solutions have been introduced by some experts. On the top of them are the ratification of the resolutions on millennium development ...
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