نمونه جواب رایتینگ آیلتس تسک با 2 با نمره 8 در آزمون آکادمیک نوشته شده توسط دانشجویان دکتر آرین کریمی
IELTS Writing Task 2
It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.
It is a widely held perception that individuals do not spend time with family members like before. This essay aims to identify the sources of this problem and offer possible solutions.
On the basis of research findings over the last few decades, financial constrains have made both parents work and made it difficult for them to get together after a hard long day and spend any time with their children and even with themselves being overtired. The second source of this problem concerns with the use of technology. It is an irrefutable fact that technology has kept family members apart considerably and made them indoor types to stay busy with sedentary and passive activities. A salient example is the use of the cellphone which is widely seen in ever one’s hands nowadays. Unfortunately a vast majority of people would rather work with their cellphone rather than talk to others. This issue has led family members to live in isolation.
Admittedly, there are two main solutions to this critical problem. Firstly, individuals have to lessen the amount of workload to enjoy more time with family members and friends. In so doing, they would get together to share more feelings and emotions. Further, though, and equally important is to allot particular time during the day to use their cellphones so that they can dedicate more time being with their family members and intimate friends. I wish people realize the enjoyment of spending time with others and appreciate the importance of that.
By way of conclusion, given that multiple factors contribute to individuals’ isolation due to workload as well as technology role in human’s life, based on family counselors’ advice, it is recommended, regarding the above-mentioned solutions, individuals pay exclusive attention to the value of family gatherings which demands further consideration.
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Sample Answer written by One of Dr.Arian Karimi stuents, Mrs.somayyeh N
